Task 9 Final Pitch

Reviewing my work:This is my final Pitch for my magazine. After I got some feedback from my peers about my first, I tried to make improvements on my second by speaking clearly, explaining my ideas in more details and making it flow.

I think I got the message about my magazine and target audience across very well.

The unique thing about my magazine concept is its full of puzzles and colourful pages and also girls can become a member of the magazine and get the magazine sent to there houses every month and the girls can enter competitions to win riding holidays. My magazine stands out from all the other horse magazines as "Horsey Hooves" is full of competitions and puzzles and free giveaways which will really capture my target audience.

I felt really positive after presenting  my second. Two particular things I felt pleased about were I really explained my ideas and I had good eye contact. Two things I think I could probably change next time would be that I stayed in role and not laughed or smiled and my body language and use my hands more.